Original text:
Loyalty Userpics are extra userpics given to paid users as a reward for their paid account history with the site. You receive an additional userpic for each of the following:
* For every three months of paid time you (or another person) purchase for your account.
* For every continuous 12 months of paid time applied to your account
* For every three months of paid time you had before March 15, 2006
Proposed new text:
Loyalty Userpics are extra userpics given to paid users as a reward for their paid account history with the site. You receive an additional userpic for each of the following:
* For every three months of paid time you (or another person) purchase for your account.
* For every continuous 12 months of paid time applied to your account
* If you had a paid account on March 15, 2006 or renewed your expired paid account between March 15, 2006 and April 14, 2006, for every three months of paid time you had before March 15, 2006
It needs to be more accurate (see http://community.livejournal.com/paidmembers/17605.html). Feel free to tweak further before updating. :)