Don't Techno for an Answer (boredinsomniac) wrote in lj_userdoc,
Don't Techno for an Answer
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grammar issue in #38

This sentence is bothering me. "They have fewer benefits and features than Plus and Paid accounts, however they have less ads than Plus accounts." A few small changes:

"They have fewer benefits and features than Plus and Paid accounts. However, they also have fewer ads than Plus accounts." Another option would be "less advertising" in place of "fewer ads."
Tags: cat-levels, faq38, status-resolved
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